I do not have to read the entire PDF over and over again to check. Would be great that you cite the page number for the PDF like how Rockstar Games Presents Table Tennis handles it.
The powers you can unlock depend Cole's relationship with Kuo and Nix and his Karma - players ( MOS:YOU, depend "on").The gameplay section should be written in present tense, which means that I should not see a lot of "will' throughout the article.The article does not seem to talk about that. How the relationship between characters influence gameplay. The powers you can unlock depend Cole's relationship with Kuo and Nix and his Karma.You should split the Karma stuff to a new paragraph.Cole's health will regenerate over time.I would like to more focus on the Misc power and the Ionic power, which sounds like something important from what I have read from the source.he can "Bio Drain" humans - What does this mean then? Article should be written in a way that everyone understands.IGN review does not tell me that Amp is an electrical weapon. Cole can engage in melee with enemies using an electrical weapon called the Amp - engage in melee "combat".The game features many different possible powers, ranging from simple electric bolts to large electric rockets.A source is needed for this statement (Cole is unable to use vehicles, take up weapons, or swim), IGN review does not tell me that he doesn't take fall damage.Due to being vivified electricity, Cole is unable to use vehicles, - "vivified" sounds like a strange word to use here.and either for better or worse in dealing with the citizens of New Marais - You should mention this after you mention the Karma system.The player controls Cole and primarily interacts with the world of New Marais through Cole's electricity-based powers - Sounds like that if you don't use your power, you cannot interact with the world.You need to mention them again in the release section instead. You do not need all these release dates in the lead.However, it was criticized for its Karma system and camera" I would rephrase it to "the game was generally well received by gaming media upon release, with praise particularly directed at the game's city-design, traversal and graphics. It was noted for its fictional city, traversal, and improved graphics, while being criticized for its Karma system and camera.You need to mention the game's plot in the lead as well.You can put focus on only one to two elements, not all The sentences in the second paragraph of the lead do not seem to be related to each other.The player is given several opportunities to use these powers for Good or Evil purposes in the game's Karma system - "Good" and "Evil" do not need to be capitalized.Japanese release date is not needed if it is not developed in Japan.You do not need citations in the infobox for uncontroversial stuff like the game's release dates per WP:LEADCITE.
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